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2022年6月写作(第一套)

Part I Writing

1、Directions: Suppose you are going to write a proposal to your school library for improving its service. You are to write about its current problems and possible solutions to these problems. You will have 30 minutes to write the proposal. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

正确答案:

参考范文

To whom it may concern,

I am Li Ming, a senior student in our university. In order to help improve the service of our school library, I am writing to give you some suggestions.

To begin with, the books in the library are very old, which makes it difficult for students to learn about the latest research findings. Therefore, it would be sensible to raise fund for purchasing some new books and keep them up to date. In addition, there are not enough computers in the computer room. It is common to see that many students, who need to search information, have to wait for a computer for a long time. If possible, I sincerely hope that the number of the computers could be increased to improve students’ learning efficiency and save their time.

Hope our library will continue to make improvements. Thank you for your time and consideration.

Sincerely,

Li Ming

参考译文

致有关人士:

我叫李明,是我们大学的一名大四学生。为了帮助提升我们学校图书馆的服务质量,我写信提出一些建议。

首先,图书馆的书都很旧,这让学生难以了解到最新的研究成果。因此,明智的做法是筹款购买一些新书,并进行持续更新。此外,机房里的电脑的数量是不够的,需要搜索资料的同学经常不得不等很久才能有一台电脑。如果可能,我真诚地希望增加电脑的数量,以帮助学生提高学习效率,节省时间。

希望我们的图书馆继续改进。感谢您抽出时间考虑这件事。

真诚地,

李明

答案解析:

写作指南

        本次写作要求考生给自己学校的图书馆写一封建议书(proposal),以帮助改进图书馆的服务质量。作文可采用信件格式,围绕现有问题和相应的建议展开,首先描述图书馆存在的问题;接着提出能够解决这些问题的建议和措施;最后礼貌总结,提出对图书馆的未来展望。

文章大纲

        第一段:自我介绍,说明写信目的。

        第二段:指出校图书馆目前存在的问题,并提出相应的建议与措施。

        第三段:简短总结,希望图书馆持续改进,并表示感谢。

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