Part I Writing
1、Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a news report to your campus newspaper on a visit to a local farm organized by your Student Union. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
正确答案:
参考范文
A Visit to a Local Farm
The Student Union organized a visit to a local farm on May 20th. It is aimed to help college students know more about farms.
It is known to us that life in a farm is quite different from that in city. There is more fresh air and less noise, which is unusual for the students who are born and raised in cities. The students were on a visit to the fields where all kinds of crops were growing and the farm was equipped with modernized agricultural facilities. During the visit, they fed the animals and watered vegetables with the advanced equipment. The sights that tractors ran here and there in the field and drones sprayed pesticide in the sky impressed the students greatly.
The rapid development of technology and science does change our life in all aspects, especially in agriculture. Through the visit, the students have learned a lot of professional knowledge about modern farming, which will help increase their awareness of the importance of a better grasp of scientific knowledge.
参考译文
参观当地农场
学生会在5月20日举办了一项参观当地的农场的活动。这项活动旨在帮助大学生多了解当地农场的一些情况。
众所周知,农场生活和城市生活有很大的不同。农场的空气很清新,而且噪音也很少,这对从小就生活在城市里的学生来说很不寻常。学生们参观了田地,那里种植着各种农作物,并配备着现代农业器械。在参观期间,他们还用一些先进的农业设备进行农场动物的喂养及蔬菜的灌溉。拖拉机在农田里跑,无人机在空中撒药的景象给学生们留下了深刻的印象。
科技的快速发展确实在很多方面改变了我们的生活,尤其是在农业方面。通过这次参观活动,学生们了解了许多专业的现代农业知识,这会帮助他们意识到更好地掌握科学知识的重要性。
答案解析:
写作指南
从题目所给的内容可以看出,这次四级考试的写作考查了新闻报道这一新的文章体裁。要注意新闻稿的格式及内容特点:一方面格式上要写出标题;另一方面内容上要写明事件的基本情况、事情经过及对事件的看法等。写作时要注意文章的逻辑以及语法的多样性和正确性。
文章大纲
第一段:点明事件的基本情况(人物、时间、地点、事件)。
第二段:描述事情的具体经过(所见所闻)。
第三段:对这一事件的总结(对事件的看法、观点)。
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