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2019年6月写作(第三套)

Part I Writing

1、Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a news report to your campus newspaper on a visit to a Hope elementary school organized by your Student Union. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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参考范文

A Visit to a Hope Elementary School

The Student Union organized a visit to a Hope Elementary School on May 20th, with the purpose of making people know more about those schools today.

Children are the future of our country and we are glad to see them studying in such a great environment. The school visited has many advanced facilities, and the teachers show great care for the students. All the fundamental facilities, including the laboratories, the multimedia rooms and the library, are brand-new. The teachers can use projection screen to teach, which is more convenient than blackboards for both teachers and students. In addition, the courses emphasizes not only theoretical knowledge but also the development of students’ personality and physical health. There are also many optional lessons for students to broaden their horizons and develop their interests of study.

After witnessing the achievements of this school, we can say that the construction of hope primary schools is becoming increasingly mature, which makes many children who once could not go to school have access to education. All in all, more attention and efforts should be devoted to education so that this positive trend can continue.

参考译文

参观希望小学

学生会在5月20日组织了一场参观希望小学的活动,目的是让人们对现如今的希望小学有更多的了解。

儿童是国家的未来,我们很高兴看到他们能在这么好的条件下学习。被参观的这所学校有许多先进的设备,老师对学生也是关爱有加。实验室、多媒体室和图书馆在内的各种基础设施都是崭新的。老师在上课时可以使用投影屏幕讲课,这样对老师和学生来说都比使用黑板更方便。此外,学校的课程不仅强调讲解理论知识,也会关注学生个性和身体健康的发展。学校还为学生开设了许多选修课,以使他们见识更广、学习兴趣更浓。

在见证了这所学校的成果之后,不得不说国家对希望小学的建设日趋成熟,很多曾经无法上学的孩子也都获得了受教育的机会。总之,对教育投入更多的关注和努力,才能使这一积极的趋势得以延续下去。

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写作指南

        从题干可以看出,本次四级考试的写作属于应用文的新闻报道类,要求根据学生会组织的参观希望小学活动,为校报写一篇新闻稿。该题材在英语四级写作中首次出现,写作时可将重点放在描述希望小学的所见所闻以及参观小学的感受上,注意文章逻辑性。

文章大纲

第一段:简述活动内容以及活动目的。

第二段:举例说明在参观中的见闻。

第三段:总结见闻,表达自己感想并强调教育对孩子的重要性。

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