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2016年6月写作(第二套)

Part I Writing

1、Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to expressyour thanks to one of your school teachers upon entering college.You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

正确答案:

A letter to Miss WuDear Miss Wu,I am writing to express my gratitude for your help on my English learning in thisterm.(直接表达感谢)Thanks to you that I got the confidence back to learn myEnglish well.To be honest, I have failed in almost all my English exams since I started to learnit in primary school.(背景铺垫)English had been my worst subject among all thecompulsive courses before I attended your classes. Your teaching style is differentfrom that of others, which draws all the students’attention to the contents and helpsus memorize everything. I have really benefited a lot from that.(感谢的原因)What surprised me most is that I could get an A in my final.(故事情节继续推进)I just want to convey my heartfelt gratitude again for your splendid work. If itwas not you, I couldn’t believe English study could be such an easy task to me.I wish you all the best, my dearest English teacher.(祝福语结尾)

Yours sincerely,

Betty

【参考译文】

亲爱的吴老师:

写这封信是想要表达我的感谢之情,感谢这学期你在我英语学习上的帮助。多亏了你, 我才能够重拾信心学好英语。

说实话, 我自从小学开始学英语就几乎从来没有考试及格过。在上你的课之前英语一直都是我所有必修课程中最差的那一科。你的教学风格不同于其他人, 可以吸引所有学生的注意力并且让大家记得很牢,这让我很受益。最让我惊讶的是在期末考试中我的成绩是A。我特别想对你的付出表达我衷心的感谢。如果不是你, 我都不敢相信英语对于我来说可以如此简单。

祝你一切安好, 我最亲爱的英语老师。

此致

敬礼!

贝蒂

答案解析:

【万能引导句】

1. I am writing to express my gratitude for your help on…书信中表达感谢的方式,直接说明写信的目的是表达什么样的感激之情。

2. To be honest, I have done something…坦白的说,我做了什么什么…… 这句话可以用来铺陈背景,或者直接叙事。

3. What surprised me most is that…最让我吃惊地是……可以表示情节的推进,或者转折。

4. I wish you all the best.希望你万事如意。

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