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2016年6月写作(第三套)

Part I Writing

1、Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to express your thanks to your parents or any other family members upon making memorable achievements. You should write at least 120words but no more than 180 words.

正确答案:

A letter to my parents

It has been 2 months since the last time I went home from school.(背景说明, 表达对父母的思念 ) I miss you both so much. Each time when I walked into my college, I could recall what you had done for me last year.(回忆,引出下文要描述的事件)

I feel very grateful for that you gave me all you had just to make sure I could reach my goal to enter into this university someday.(表达感谢,后面说明细节) Because of what you have done for me, my dream has come true. So Mom, you no longer have to get up early in the morning to prepare the breakfast for me and drive me to school in time. Dad, you don’t have to stay all day out to just create a quiet learning circumstance each weekend. You have done so much for me that I will try my best and never let you down.(表达对父母的感恩之情)

I am so lucky to have you as my parents and to enter into my dream school.(再次感谢,结束文章)Thank you so much again for your love on me. I love you both.

Yours,

Kate

【译文】

亲爱的爸爸、妈妈:

距离上次从学校回去家里已经有两个月了。很想你们。每次我进入这所大学时 , 我都会回忆起去年你们为我所付出的一切。

我很感激你们毫无保留的付出,只为有一天我能达成自己的目标顺利进入这所大学。现在我的梦想成真了。所以妈妈 , 你不必很早起床在早上为我准备早餐、送我上学;爸爸 , 你不需要每周末都留在外面 , 确保我能有一个安静的学习环境。你们为我付出了这么多 , 我也会尽我所能不让你失望的。

我很幸运有你们做我的父母,以及进入我梦想中的学校。再一次谢谢你们的爱。我爱你们。

你们的孩子

凯特

答案解析:

从题目中的内容可以看出,这是写给父母或者其他家人的一封感谢信,而且是关于获得难忘的成就方面。和父母朝夕相处,总是会有一些难忘的故事发生,具体在一些小成就小收获方面的内容应该会很多,事情可以小到学到了一些处事方法,大到在某个领域获得了可观的成就或奖项。主要侧重家人在这件事情上所给予的支持以及成效,以表示自己的感谢。

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