Part I Writing
1、For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then comment on the kid's understanding of going to school. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
正确答案:
Going to School Is Indispensable to Students
As the picture shows, the child asks his mother why he should go to school since his phone knows everything. In terms of my point of view, much information as the phone can have access to, it still can’t replace going to school.
It is true that we can acquire much information on the Internet, but if we don’t have common knowledge, we can’t tell which information is true and which is not. School is a great place where we can learn various things, such as math, science and arts. Besides, going to school isn’t just about getting knowledge; school is a place where students can get all-round development. Students can learn how to deal with interpersonal relationships at class, get to know the importance of team spirit at sports ground and develop personal interest at school club.
All in all, students must know phones are just a helper to learn new knowledge, and they can never replace the role that going to school plays.
[译文]
上学对学生来说不可或缺
正如图片所示,孩子问他母亲:“既然手机能得到一切答案,我为什么还要上学?”就我个人而言,手机的确能获取很多信息,但它仍不能代替上学所发挥的作用。
我们的确能从网上得到很多信息,但如果我们没有常识,就无法区分真假信息。学校是一个能让我们学到各种知识的好场所,我们能在这里学到诸如数学、科学、艺术等知识。此外,上学并不只是为了获得知识,在这里学生能够得到全面发展。他们在班级能学到处理人际关系,在操场能了解到团队精神的重要性,在社团可以培养个人兴趣。
总的来说,学生必须明白手机只是获取新知识的工具,它永远也代替不了上学的作用。
答案解析:
通过分析图片可知,考生需要对图片中孩子的观点进行反驳,即“手机代替不了上学”。接着,考生需要对此进行论证,可以列举事实,也可以发表议论,主要还是应该围绕上学有哪些手机所没有的优势展开论述。最后在结尾,考生可以回归主题,也可以就主题进行适当引申。
[文章大纲]
一、描述图片内容,表明个人观点,阐述文章的中心议题即手机为什么不能代替上学,引出上学对孩子的重要性
二、对“为什么手机代替不了上学”进行论证
三、回归主题,做出总结:手机不能代替上学。
[写作常用句型]
1. As the picture shows...:正如图片所示……
遇到图画议论文时,常常会用到此句型,这个句型还可以作适当变换,变成As the picture (vividly) shows/depicts/portrays...。
It is true...:的确……
此句型可用来陈述一个事实,后面常常接否定,即:虽然现实的确是……,但……。
3. Besides:此外
用来接续第二个论证。
4. learn...get to know...develop
英语中常常会使用到排比句型,比如这里的动词排比。使用这种修辞手法的时候需要注意,词语的选择需要尽量多样化,比如上面的learn和get to know其实表达同一种意思,只是表达方式不同。
5. All in all...:总的来说……
用在第三段开头,后面可重申主题。
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