Part I Writing
1、For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay about a classmate of yours who has influenced you most in college. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
正确答案：
The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most in College
Looking back at my college life, I always think of my classmate Tom, who influenced me in many ways. I’m lucky to have him as my classmate, and without him, I won’t become who I am now.
When I was a freshman, my English was really poor, especially my oral English. Thus I seldom spoke English in the class. Tom noticed my problem and encouraged me to speak. “Everyone makes a lot of mistakes before he can speak English fluently. Just be confident and express yourself,” he encouraged me. From then on, I never felt shy and seized every opportunity to speak English. Gradually, my oral English became much better. I also became interested in reading English literature, thanks to him. He had a wide knowledge of American and English classic novels, and often told me about them. Under his influence, I read many good books.
Although we seldom meet each other now, I will never forget him—my dear classmate Tom!
[译文]
大学中对我影响最大的同学
回首大学生活，我总是会想起我的同学汤姆，他在很多方面影响了我。能跟他成为同学是非常幸运的，要是没有他，我不会成为现在的我。
当我还是大一新生的时候，我的英语非常差，尤其是我的英语口语。所以我很少在课堂上说英语。汤姆注意到了这一问题，就鼓励我说英语。他说：“每个人练就一口流利英语之前都会犯很多错误。自信一点，表达你的想法吧。”从那以后，我再也没有觉得不好意思，并抓住每个机会说英语。渐渐地，我的英语口语变得好多了。多亏他，我对阅读英文文学作品也产生了兴趣。他对美国和英国名著很精通，并常常讲给我听。在他的影响下，我读到了很多好书。
虽然我们现在很少见面，但我不会忘记亲爱的同学汤姆！
答案解析：
根据题目要求，考生需要写一篇在大学中对考生影响最深的同学的文章，并陈述原因。文章第一段可先简要介绍一下这个同学，并在第二段陈述具体有哪几点的影响。最后一段可对大学同学给自己的影响做一个总结，也可以向他表达感谢。
[文章大纲]
一、对同学进行介绍
二、陈述对自己影响深的几个方面
三、说明同学对自己的意义
[写作常用句型]
1. makes mistakes：犯错
2. seized every opportunity：抓住每个机会
类似的表达方法还有：take/grasp every opportunity（抓住每个机会）。此外，take the chance并不是指“抓住机会”，而是“碰运气、冒险”.
3. a wide knowledge of：知识渊博
其他常跟knowledge搭配的表达方法有：practical/medical/scientific knowledge（实用/医学/科学知识）、full knowledge（充分了解）、a lack of knowledge（缺乏了解）等。
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