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2014年12月写作(第三套)

Part I Writing

1、For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay about a campus activity that has benefited you most. You should write at least 120 words but No more than 180 words.

正确答案:

The Campus Activity That Has Benefited Me Most

During my college life, I took part in many activities. More or less, they had positive impacts on me. Among them, the marathon race held in our campus benefited me most.

First of all, I learned the importance of persistence. Runners who wanted to make it to the finish had to run all the way. It was such a disgrace to give up half way, so very tired as I was, I made it to the end. And I felt extremely happy not because I tasted the fruit of success but I conquered myself. Whats more, I started to run regularly after I took part in the race. Running not only helps me build up my body, but also make me look energetic. I even feel much less stressed after I run for just 20 minutes.

Taking part in the campus marathon race is one of the most valuable experiences in my life, and I always feel grateful for it!

[译文]

让我受益最多的校园活动

大学期间,我参加了很多活动。它们或多或少都对我产生了积极的影响。其中,校园举办的马拉松比赛让我受益最多。

首先,我学会了坚持的重要性。如果要到达终点,选手就必须不间断地跑。中途放弃是非常丢脸的事情,所以尽管当时我很累,我还是跑到了最后。我感到非常高兴,并不是因为我尝到了胜利的果实,而是我战胜了自己。此外,自从我参加了马拉松比赛以后,我开始定期跑步了。跑步不仅有助于强壮身体,还能让我看上去有活力。仅仅跑20分钟甚至能让我的压力大大缓解。

参加校园马拉松比赛是我最珍贵的经历之一,我对此一直心怀感激!

答案解析:

根据题目要求,考生需要写一篇在大学中让考生受益最大的校园活动的文章,并陈述原因。文章第一段可先简要介绍一下这个活动,并在第二段具体陈述活动给自己带来了哪几点的影响。最后一段可回归主题,进一步强调这个活动对自己的意义。

[文章大纲]

一、对活动进行介绍

二、陈述此活动对自己影响深的几个方面

三、阐述活动对自己的意义

[写作常用句型]

1. First of all... What’s more...:首先……其次……

2. learn the importance of...:学会……的重要性

3. taste the fruit of success:品尝胜利的果实

4. conquer myself:战胜自己

5. one of the most valuable experiences:最宝贵的经历之一

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