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2014年6月写作(第二套)

Part I Writing

1、For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the following question.You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.Suppose a foreign friend of yours is coming to visit your campus, what is the most interesting place you would like to take him/her to see and why?

正确答案:

The Most Interesting Place in My Campus

If a foreign friend is coming to visit my campus, I would like to take him to our lake—the Mirror Lake.

The Mirror Lake is popular among the students for its clear water. Throwing rubbish into the lake is prohibited, and there are many kinds of fish living in the lake. Besides, a lot of trees and flowers are planted around the lake, so it is such a pleasure to take a walk here. Students often come here to practice their oral English, take a nap or just watch the beautiful scenery. And wild animals also visit there, like squirrels, cuckoos, and swans. Lastly, it is a very quiet place. In contrast to the noisy streets outside the campus, this place is somewhat like a secluded heaven. If anyone feels unhappy or nervous, he can come here to seek comfort.

The lake is very different from any other lakes, and I’m sure my foreign friend would like it.

[译文]

我们校园中最有意思的地方

如果一个外国朋友来参观我的校园,我会带他去我们校园的镜湖。

镜湖因为它清澈的湖水而受到学生的欢迎。这里禁止将垃圾扔进湖里,湖里面有很多种类的鱼。此外,湖的周围种了很多树和花,因此在这里散步是一种乐趣。学生常常来这里练习口语、睡觉或仅仅看美丽的景色。野生动物们也会拜访这里,像是松鼠、喜鹊和天鹅。最后,这里非常安静。这里就像是一个与世隔绝的天堂,与校园外吵闹的街道形成了鲜明对比。如果有人感到不高兴或紧张,他可以来到这里寻求慰藉。

这座湖跟其他湖有很大区别,我相信我的外国朋友会喜欢它。

答案解析:

此段需要介绍校园中的一个有趣的场所,因此考生最好选取一些有特点、容易展开的地方。首段可对场所进行介绍,在文章第二段陈述选择这个场所的理由,最后再简要进行总结即可。

[文章大纲]

一、介绍自己会选择的场所

二、陈述选择这一场所的理由,尽量写2-3点,不然文章会很单薄

三、做简要总结,该地值得推荐

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