Section Ⅲ Writing
1、Part A51. Directions: Write a letter of about 100 words to the president of your university, suggesting how to improve students’ physical condition. You should include the details you think necessary. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead. Do not write the address. (10 points)
正确答案:
【参考范文】
Dear Mr. President,
I am an undergraduate of this university and writing to put forward some advice on how to improve students’ physical condition. My suggestions are as the following.
First of all, I suggest that we should make full use of the advantages of physical education classes on campus. Students should not only be aware of the importance of physical education, but also be encouraged to actively participate in the sports class. What’s more, we should attach importance to the role of extracurricular activities. For example, we can organize various ball games, such as football games, basketball games and so on. Last but not least, more sports facilities can be added around the dormitory buildings to stimulate students to take more physical exercise.
It is a great honor for me to share my suggestions with you. I would appreciate it if you would consider my suggestions.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
【参考译文】
亲爱的校长先生,
我是这所大学的一名本科生,我写这封信是为了就如何改善学生的身体状况提出一些建议。我的建议如下。
首先,我建议我们应充分利用校园体育课的优势。学生不仅应该意识到体育教育的重要性,而且应该被鼓励积极参与到体育课中去。更重要的是,我们应该重视课外活动的作用。例如,我们可以组织各类球类比赛,如足球比赛,篮球比赛等等。最后,我们可以在宿舍周围多增加一些运动设施,以激励学生进行更多的体育锻炼。
我很荣幸能和您分享我的建议。如果您能考虑我的建议,我将不胜感激。
谨致问候,
李明
答案解析:
【题目分析】
2014年小作文题目要求写一封信给校长,就如何提高学生的身体素质给出建议。写作时要注意使用偏正式、礼貌性的语言。建议信的开头可以直接表明写信的目的,之后给出具体的建议,最后表达感谢,期待回复即可。
2、Part B52. Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) interpret its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)
正确答案:
【参考范文】
The picture on the left vividly describes a scene that thirty years ago, a young mother held her lovely daughter’s hand and walked happily along the road. The right half of the picture shows that, as time goes by, the daughter who has grown up supports her elderly mother with her hand and walks with smiles on both of their faces. What this picture wants to tell us is just like the words at the bottom of the picture: accompanying.
Parents and children should support each other. On the one hand, parents give us life and nurture us. It is precisely because of our parents’ unconditional dedication and love that we can experience a rich and colorful life. On the other hand, when parents are old, we should also assume our due responsibilities, which is to accompany and support parents. But many young people are unable to stay with their parents under the pressure of living and working. Fortunately, more and more people are making efforts in this regard, appealing to young people to go home to visit and accompany their parents.
In my opinion, first of all, we should be filial to our parents in return for their nurture. More importantly, the public should advocate filial piety and responsibility. Filial piety is the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation, and we should carry on this virtue better.
【参考译文】
左边的图片生动形象地描述了一幅场景——三十年前,一位年轻的母亲牵着她可爱的女儿,在路上幸福地走着。图片的右半部分则是,随着时间的飞逝,已经长大成人的女孩搀扶着自己年迈的母亲,脸上洋溢着笑容。这幅图画想告诉我们的道理正如图画下方文字所说:相携。
父母和孩子之间应该相互扶持。一方面,父母给予了我们生命,养育了我们。正是因为有了父母对我们无条件的付出和爱,我们才可以体验丰富多彩的人生。另一方面,当父母老了,我们也应该承担我们应有的责任,就是陪伴父母、赡养父母。但现在许多年轻人迫于生活和工作的压力,根本无法陪在父母身边。幸运的是,现在越来越多的人都在为此而做出努力,呼吁年轻人要经常回家看望父母,陪伴他们。
在我看来,首先我们应该要孝顺父母,回报他们的养育之恩。更重要的是,公众应该更多地去宣传孝敬父母的意识和责任。孝顺是中华民族的传统美德,我们应该把这种美德更好地传承下去。
答案解析:
【题目分析】
2014年的大作文依旧是采用图画命题的形式,要求考生理解图画所表达的寓意,并且给出自己的见解。本次话题和亲情有关,提倡父母和孩子之间应该相互关爱、相互扶持,并呼吁年轻人要懂得孝敬父母。考生根据图画内容,合理阐述自己的见解即可。
【文章大纲】
第一段:简要描述图画中的内容,指出图画想表达的主题。
第二段:阐述父母和孩子之间相互扶持的意义。
第三段:呼吁年轻人应该多孝顺父母、陪伴父母。
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