Section Ⅲ Writing
1、Part A51. Directions: Write a letter to a friend of yours to 1) recommend one of your favorite movies and 2) give reasons for your recommendation. Your should write about 100 words on the ANSWER SHEET. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead. Do not write the address. (10 points)
正确答案：
参考范文
Dear friend,
I’m writing to recommend a film—Beasts of the Southern Wild, which is a great touch to me.
There’re some reasons for my recommendation. Firstly, the plot is metaphorical. It’s about the power of people to survive, and about community and loneliness. You can find echoes with all these people in their craziness and uneducated wisdom. Secondly, the film captures an insightful look at a culture which hardly exists in the America any more, or even in any other country for its primitivism. At last, the film is thought-provoking, leaving the audience reflecting on the relationship of humankind and nature.
I hope you’ll enjoy the movie. I am looking forward to your reply. Take care!
Yours,
Li Ming
参考译文
亲爱的朋友：
我写信是为了向你推荐《南国野兽》这部电影，它对我触动很大。
以下是我的推荐理由。首先，情节具有隐喻性，这是一部关于人们顽强生存，关于社区和孤独的电影。你可以在这些人的疯狂和未经教育的智慧中找到共鸣。第二，电影深入探寻了在美国甚至其他国家都不复存在的原始主义文化。最后，这部电影令人深思，会让观众看后反思人类与自然的关系。
我希望你能喜欢这部电影。期待你的回信。祝好！
谨上，
李明
答案解析：
本篇作文考查推荐信，要求考生向一位朋友推荐自己最喜欢的一部电影并阐明原因。首段应开门见山点名写信目的；第二段阐明推荐原因：可以从情节、特效、演员阵容、启示等角度着手；最后一段表达希望对方喜欢的期望。
2、Part B52. Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)
正确答案：
参考范文
The picture is thought-provoking: two tourists are sitting in the boat, enjoying beautiful scenery. Yet the lake behind them is full of rubbish, such as leftovers, fruit peels and plastic packages, because they are casually throwing litter into the lake. The words below read: leave “something” behind during the journey.
What the picture reveals is that tourists pollute the environment of scenic spots, turning a blind eye to public virtues. The phenomenon is not uncommon. Some tourists carve characters or draw on historic relics, climb on sculptures and architectures to take photos, and some people even spit and defecate indiscriminately. All these behaviors make our eyes sting: they spoil the scenery, and sometimes the damage caused are beyond repair, not only because historical relics are valuable but also because these uncivilized acts shadow the image of our social civilization.
I think it’s our responsibility to reverse the trend. On the one hand, every tourist should appreciate and obey public virtues and related regulations during their journey. On the other hand, those who damage historic relics and offend related regulations should be severely punished.
参考译文
这幅画发人深思：两位游客坐在船上，欣赏风景，然而他们背后的湖面上飘满剩饭、果皮、塑料包装等垃圾，因为他们随手把垃圾扔进了湖里。图画下方的字写着：旅途之“余”。
这幅画所揭示的是游客无视公共道德，污染景点环境。这种现象很常见。一些游客在历史遗迹上乱涂乱画，为了拍照去攀爬雕塑和建筑，有人甚至随地吐痰、大小便。这些行为都很刺眼：它们破坏了美景，而且有时所造成的损害是无法修复的，这不仅因为历史遗迹很珍贵，还因为这些不文明行为给我们的社会文明蒙上了阴影。
我认为我们有责任改变这种趋势。一方面，每位游客在旅途中应该尊重遵守公共道德和相关规定。另一方面，破坏文物、违反相关规定的人应得到严惩。
答案解析：
题目分析
本篇作文属于图画类作文，需要简要描述图画，解释图画所蕴含的道理并加以评价。从图画中可以看出本次作文考查环境保护：旅途中不要乱扔垃圾，其背后的含义在于：人们公共道德意识有待加强。
文章大纲
第一段：描述图画：两位游客坐在船上，一遍欣赏风景，一遍随手丢弃垃圾，湖面上已经飘满了垃圾，图片的文字是“旅程之‘余’”，所揭示的内容是游客缺乏公共道德意识。
第二段：指出图画所反映的现象具有普遍性，并指出其危害性。
第三段：呼吁人们加强公共道德意识，文明旅行。
喵呜刷题：让学习像火箭一样快速，快来微信扫码，体验免费刷题服务，开启你的学习加速器！
