Section Ⅲ Writing
1、Part A47. Directions: Suppose you won a translation contest and your friend, Jack, wrote an email to congratulate you and ask for advice on translation. Write him a reply to 1) thank him, and 2) give your advice. You should write about 100 words on the ANWSER SHEET. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead. Do not write the address. (10 point)
正确答案:
参考范文
Dear Jack,
I am very glad to receive your letter and would express my gratitude for your congratulation on my success in the translation contest. In reply to your request, I’d like to share some personal suggestions on how to improve translation skills.
To begin with, it is necessary to read extensively and constantly expose yourself to great reading materials. Through reading English and Chinese materials, you can cultivate a broad knowledge base and accumulate amount of useful expressions. Besides, practice is a must. Only by practicing as much as possible can you aware the weaknesses and strengths, which is important to improve your translation skills.
I sincerely hope that you will find these suggestions useful and I’m willing to discuss it with you about further details.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
参考译文
亲爱的杰克,
很高兴收到你的来信,在此想对你前来祝贺我在翻译比赛中获奖表示感谢。你在邮件中问道如何提高翻译水平,接下来我就如何提高翻译水平分享一下我的个人建议。
首先,博览群书并且不断地让自己接触高质量的阅读材料很有必要。通过阅读中英文材料,你可以打下广泛的知识基础,并且积累很多有用的表达。除此之外,练习是必不可少的。只有通过练习,你才能了解自己的弱项和长处,这对于提升阅读技巧是非常重要的。
我真诚地希望这些建议对你有帮助。我很乐意和你进一步探讨这个话题。
诚挚的,
李明
答案解析:
本篇作文要求写一封回信,回复函的格式要完整,语言风格应真诚、自然。
文章应包含以下两方面内容:第一,感谢对方的来信祝贺;第二就如何提高翻译水平提出建议。
2、Part B48. Directions: Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points).
正确答案:
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As is shown in the pie chart, college students travel based on different purposes. 37 percent of college students travel to appreciate beautiful scenery. Next comes the aim of relieving pressure, which accounts for 33 percent. Travelling to make friends, developing their independent capabilities and the rest account for 9%, 6% and 15% respectively.
The survey shows that most college students go on a journey to enjoy the beautiful sightseeing as well as relieve pressure. For one thing, nowadays, college students have more ample time and curiosity to explore the outside world. Travelling will not only provide opportunities to see the outside world, but also increase students’ knowledge and broaden their horizons. For another thing, college students suffer pressures from academic study, employment and interpersonal relationship, and thus, travelling acts as a good stress remover. People always feel refreshed and revitalized after coming back from a trip.
In view of these arguments, it is of no surprise that college students travel mainly for enjoying the beautiful sight and relieving pressure.
参考译文
饼形图中显示,高校学生的旅行目的是不同的。37%的大学生为了欣赏美景而旅行;仅次之的是为了缓解压力,占33%。交友、培养独立自主的能力和其他等旅行目的分别占9%、6%和15%。
调查显示大多数大学生旅行是为了欣赏美景和缓解压力。一方面,如今,大学生有更多空闲的时间和好奇心去探索外面的世界。旅行不仅让学生们有接触外面世界的机会,还丰富了他们的知识,开拓了眼界。另一方面,大学生承受了学业、就业和人际关系方面的压力,旅行可以帮助他们消除这些压力。人们旅行回来后会感到神清气爽、充满活力。
鉴于这些论述,学生们主要为了欣赏美景和缓解压力而旅行也不足为奇。
答案解析:
题目分析
本次的作文题目是一个饼形图,图表是关于某高校学生旅游目的调查。其中“欣赏风景”和“缓解压力”两部分的比重最大,而其他三部分的占比较少。考试在写作时,一方面需要描述图表的信息,另一方面需要对此发表自己的评论。
文章大纲
第一段分析图表的基本信息,列出各个旅游目的所占比重;
第二段指出“欣赏风景”和“缓解压力”这两方面所占的比重大,并就此发表自己的意见。
第三段总结全文。
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