Directions: Suppose you are going to write a proposal to your school clinic for improving its service. You are to write about its current problems and possible solutions to these problems. You will have 30 minutes to write the proposal. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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Dear Sir or Madam,

After hearing about some complaints about our school clinic’s service, as a college student, I’m writing to propose a few suggestions to address its current problems.

As far as I am concerned, the current problems of our school clinic involve its short opening hours, low medicine storage and lack of publicity. To begin with, the school clinic ought to extend its opening hours and provide a 24-hour call service in case of emergencies. Moreover, in order to cope with different kinds of diseases, the school clinic should prepare a few more varieties of common medicine. Lastly, it would be nice if the school clinic could regularly organize activities to popularize some healthcare knowledge among teachers and students.

As an indispensable component of our campus, the school clinic should better ensure the well-being of the students as well as the teaching staff. I look forward to its further improvement and I hope my proposal could be adopted.

Best Wishes,

Li Ming

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尊敬的先生或女士：

由于听说了一些针对我们校医室服务的投诉，作为一名大学生，在此我想提出一些建议，以解决目前存在的问题。

在我看来，我们校医室目前存在的问题包括开放时间短、药品种类少和缺乏宣传。首先，校医室应该延长开放时间，并提供24小时呼叫服务，以防有紧急情况发生。此外，为了应对不同的疾病，校医室应该准备更多种类的常用药。最后，如果校医室能够定期组织活动，在老师和学生中普及一些医疗保健知识，那就太好了。

校医室作为校园里不可或缺的一部分，应该更好地保障学生和教师的健康。我期待着它的进一步改进，也期望我的建议能够得到采纳。

祝好，

李明

写作指南

        本次写作要求考生给自己学校的医务室写一封建议书（proposal），针对的主要是如何改进校医室的服务。文章可采用信件格式，主体部分用常见的三段式结构，第一段引出话题，表明写作目的；第二段指出现有问题，并提出具体建议；第三段简短总结，指出校医室的重要意义，并提出期望。

文章大纲

        第一段：引出校医室这一话题，表明写信的目的是提建议。

        第二段：就校医室的开放时间、药品种类和活动宣传方面，指出现有问题，并提出建议。

        第三段：指出校医室的重要意义，希望建议被采纳。